One day I was walking down the pavement toward the lake. My family and I were heading there for the coin collecting challenge. The moderators were going to drop the coins into the lake and wait until they finished sinking. They waited on a little red boat while everybody jumped in. I swam right down to the bottom because that is where the coins go. I collected 104 coins and swam back up to the surface. When I got back to the dock, I climbed the ladder and went to the judges table. I weighed in my coins and found out I won! It was an amazing contest.
Dear Meredith,
I love your story and it is so creative! Great Job!
Sophia
Hi Meredith
What a super story! You have a simple idea that you write about well, it is easy for the reader to follow and you round your story off well. I am glad that you won, I love a story with a happy ending.
Miss T Team 100wc